Sunday, November 24, 2013

Red Stripes with Pink Dots

Poems are so much fun! They are a fun to write, and a challenge, because they could always be better. This is a topic I've been thinking about lately... why is it that we seem to become more and more fearful as we grow up? To a degree, it is good to care about what other people think. But when I make that a focus rather than a product of my relationship with God, I get into trouble.


Red Stripes with Pink Dots

Her tiny skirt takes flight as she twirls,
Hair streaming, eyes bright without fear.
Unworried, unhurried, the free little girl
skips unfazed by the how she appears.

Her babble and chatter don't always make sense
And she's wearing red stripes with pink dots.
But her smiling eyes exude innocence
Concerned by her audience she's not.

Regardless of who sees her "flaws",
Regardless of who shakes their head,
She'll put forth no fraud,
And dance freely instead
Deaf to critique and applause.


She belts out tunes with her clear, bubbly voice
Unaware of the tone, pitch, or key.
In every song, every giggle, every choice,
She is completely, entirely, free.

She dives headlong into new games,
Seeing not a way she might fail,
But instead, mere fun, no need for shame
Next to her, even winners pale.


Regardless of who sees her "flaws",
Regardless of who shakes their head,
She'll put forth no fraud,
And dance freely instead
Deaf to critique and applause

Many will cringe when they see her displays
Not used to unrestrained glee
But as she skips and twirls, at the end of the day,
She is the one who is free.




6 comments:

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    1. Aww, thanks Savanna! Your comments are always day-makers!

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  2. Lovely poem with beautiful imagery and a very thought-provoking subject! I'm glad you shared it, though I know that feeling about how "it could always be better!" :)

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    1. Thanks for your encouragement, Mrs. Mann! You are so thoughtful to comment even when you're so busy!

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  3. Hannah I always enjoy your poems. They have such a good rythym and I love the subjects!! :) absolutely adorable girly

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  4. Aww, you're a poet yourself, girly! Thank you for the encouragement!

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